- Fast cuts
- Shows a certain amount of information but doesn't give the plot away
- In the white room
- Dark to light
- Shot of the bottom of the stairs
- Sound
- Quick shots
- Screaming
- Hand
- Trapped in the house
- Night time
- Good ending
- Last shot
- Establishing shot
- Mirror shot
- Headlight shot
- Lighting
- Tragic past
- Acting
- Mysterious
- Night
Bad:
- Sink bit
- Don't understand the relevance of the last shot
- Delete talking bit at the end
- Improve text/titles
- Lack of variety of shot types
- Sound could vary more
- Production company logo
- People unsure about the plot
- People crawling
- Need information on other people
- Unclear shots
- Not very pacey
- Hand sliding too long
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